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CONFESS Chpt 3 : FINAL:

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A RokuNami/NamiRoxas Fan-Fic! Please review!=) I thank you all for reading this far please enjoy the finale chapter of "CONFESS"
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[C O N F E S S]

♥♥ Chapter: 003 FINAL ♥♥

The music pulsed through my headphones. I turned the page of my comic book, placing the other in the bowl of chips beside me.

" And this is how I spend my Saturdays. Reading comics,eating junk food,listening to X-Factor. No worries about school or teachers." I said happily, before chewing another chip. Suddenly my door opened. It was my mom, she walked in, smiling at me brightly as she placed a basket of my laundry on my desk. I take my head phones off, and smile back to her.

" Hey mom."

" Hi sweety." She said cheerfully as she unloaded the soft fresh lilac smelling clothes from the basket.

"I told you to keep your suit clean." She said examining my black suit from the basket."You've only worn it once and now there's a big stain on the shirt."

I ate another chip and took a quick sip of soda before responding.

"Sorry? I tried to being careful at Aunt Rikku's wedding. If her chocobos didn't attack me when I ate cheese dip everything would have been fine."

My mom shook her head, sighing. After a few minutes she leaves and I go back to my me time.

"Start to blush when somebody says your name
In my stomach there's a pain
See you walk in my direction, I go the other way
I start to stutter when I speak !"


"Baby When I see you,when I see you,never know when you might walk by" I sang loudly, jumping into the second verse.

"You're always on my mind. When you come around I get shy !"

" Roxas?"

I jolted up from my bed, turning to see Tidus staring at me with his mouth hung open.

Crud

"You ever knock dude?" I said flustered as I took off my headphones,and muted the music.

"You're mom let me in." He said trying to hold back his laughter. Tidus walked over to my bed, and sat down, he quickly grabbed the bowl of chips beside me,stuffing handfuls into his mouth.

"Thanks mom." I intoned regretfully. " What do you want Tidus besides my snacks?"

Tidus took a soda from the pack and snapped it open. He took a a few gulps and replied"Tasty snacks by the way. But I'm not just here for the food. I'm here to help you with your girl troubles!"

"No dude. I said I didn't want any of your help. I don't need your help!"
Tidus shook his head, as he gulped the can of soda down,causing some of it to fall on my sheets.

" Roxas,Roxas,Roxas. One little mishap shouldn't stop you from finding true love!" He said dramatically, slapping his hand on my shoulder. "Come on Naminé seems like a nice girl, if you don't catch her soon some other guy will!"

If I don't act soon it'll be too late. But Tidus isn't much help.

I craned my head to Tidus,But as much as I don't want his help I also don't want to lose Naminé!Both decisions were weighing down my brain like bricks. After a few moments I decided,and said.

"Fine I'll use your help. But what's in it for you?"

Tidus rose from my bed, the chip bag, presumably empty swayed to the floor. "Nothings in it for me,excepting seeing my best friend win the girl of his dreams! That and snacks."

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The train came to a halt, and the doors opened, we get out of the train and walked to the town mall. The mall wasn't very crowed ,except for a few teens loitering around and some parents shopping with their kids.

" Remind me why we're at the mall again?" I asked Tidus, confused.

" Roxas the first thing you gotta know about woman is that each of them are different.

They may act the same but deep down they all want to be treated as individuals." Tidus Explained, looking at me.

"Okay, so how's this going to help me?"

" Well you gotta know what your girl likes! What does Naminé  like to do? Her hobbies? Her favorite color."

"Um well, she likes to draw,and she likes going to the perfume shops and smoothie shack."

" Well.. that's a start" Tidus said disappointed. "Well dude I can't blame you for not knowing much, I mean all you do is look from afar. You've never gotten closer to her. But that'll change right about now." Said Tidus.

"H-hey you're making it sound like I've never talked to her or something."

"Have you?" Tidus replied.. I laughed lowly,rubbing the back of my head sheepishly.

Tidus and I continued to walk around the mall, we took the elevator up to the second floor and ended up in-front of:

"The perfume store?" I questioned Tidus. " Why are we-"

"Because you're going to try and find a gift for Naminé ." He said pushing me into the vanilla-cupcakes,-lilac smelling place.

" But it smells in here. I think I'm getting sinuses!" I yelled. Customers in the store turned to us,giving us weird looks. Tidus walked ahead of me glancing around the shop. Bottle after bottle of soap,shampoo,body wash, you named it was sitting before me. I walked to a shelve and picking up a white bottle named "Vanilla Twilight" I uncapped the bottle and held it to my nose to smell. It smelt like vanilla with a flower scent.. roses?

That's not good enough I don't even think she likes roses..I placed the bottle back on the shelf, and grabbed a fancy purple heart shaped bottle of perfume. I held the nozzle and sprayed the fragrance in the air,my eyes watered, I scrunched my nose at the putrid strong scent of bubblegum and alcohol.

"Ugh, girls like wearing this stuff?" I placed the container back on the shelve annoyed.
I don't even know what Naminé likes. How am I suppose to find her a gift? Just then a woman with long brown hair in braids walked up to me.

" Is there anything I can help you with dear?" she asked kindly.

" Um, well. Yeah actually I'm trying to find a gift for um my... friend." I said, sheepishly.

The woman smiles."Oh you're "friend" huh?" she said teasingly "well I think we can find something for her. Right this way please." I followed the woman to the other side of the store, she scans a wall of products and picks out a white bottle, with a white lily flower and green ribbon tied to the neck.

" This is our most popular product. I recommend it to all of the young men who come in here looking for gifts for their friends." She handed me the bottle,we walked to the counter and she rang my purchase. Just then Tidus walked up to me smiling widely.

" Why are you so happy?" I questioned. Tidus pointed a finger behind him, I looked to where he was pointing and saw two girls (who looked like college girls)smiling and giggling at him.

" I totally scored dude. Got both of their numbers!" Hey cheered ,waving the piece of paper in his hand like a prize trophy.

" I thought you were suppose to be helping me!"

" Here you are." Said the woman, handing me a bag,suddenly she leaned over the counter to me,warily looking around us "I added a little something extra in there." she whispered cheerfully.

" Um, thanks."

" Come again, boys!~"

Tidus and I walked out of the store after a few moments Tidus spoke"What was up with that?" Tidus asked referring to the woman.

" I have no idea." I responded, just as confused. I looked into the pail paper bag, my heart raced fast and my hands were sweaty.

" I hope she likes this."

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"Just remember what I told you. Keep your head up, look her straight in the eye and lay it on her. She'll be swooned it'll totally work." Tidus said to me as we were in the courtyard of the school.

" Right. Wait lay it on her?" I exclaimed.

" Yeah man you gotta put the moves on her tell her how nice she looks,that she smells nice, that you think she's cute!"

" Um right, tell her she's cute. Okay." I intoned nervously.

" Good because there she is!" Tidus said I looked over to the other side of the yard,  Naminé was sitting on a bench, with her sketch pad in hand. I gulped.

" Go get her tiger!" Tidus pushed me forward, my knees shook as I walked across the yard. What am I going to say?If felt like time slowed as I advanced towards her, my heart beat rapidly, hands sweating, mouth dry.

'I wonder if you know, or do you have a clue?'
'When you come around I get shy'
'Try to stand, but my knees go weak'
'What's happening to me?'



I stood in-front of her, my heart felt like it was going to explode!

"Um. Hey Naminé."

Naminé looked up from her sketchpad, smiling. "Roxas hi. What's up?" She asked.

I start to stutter when I speak',


" I-I have something for you." I pulled the bag out in-front of her, Naminé took the bag, opening it carefully,she gasped in surprise.

" Oh Roxas. This is so thoughtful of you this is my favorite scent! How did you know?"

" I'm glad you like it." I placed my hand behind my head rubbing my hair.
I've got to reveal what's inside of my heart

" Naminé I really like you. I wanted to know if you will return my feelings..
"She didn't respond, because she was reading a card?I didn't add a card in there! Wait,that lady..

Naminé looked up to me,a smile spread across her lips, she rose from her seat and embraced me, I embraced her back not wanting this moment to end.♥

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THIS AMAZING COVER IS NOT MINE! IT'S THE WORK OF :iconkiome-yasha: SO GO TELL HER HOW AMAZING IT IS NOT ME! :heart:

Last and final chapter of Confess. I think it turned out well! For once Tidus's advice worked out for little Roxas! =) I felt like the ending was a bit lame I wanted to keep Roxas shy but I felt it was best to have Naminé close this off. Oh and you guys can imagine what the card said! :giggle:

Thank you all for reading this!! I really appreciate all the great feedback this story has gotten!


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Songs by mariah carey - I wish you knew and fantasia - when I see you

(c) Namine,Roxas,Tidus,Aerith are Square Enix's peps!
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SO CUTE,but what does the card say I am not a guy